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sniperddr1a
April 20th, 2007, 09:21 PM
some of my environment design sketch here,hope you like it:)

softocean
May 3rd, 2007, 06:00 PM
I like the first one a bunch - maybe separate it out with a stronger border... The second one I can't make heads or tails out of it - maybe a ground plane and a clearer horizon line will help clarify it?

My sketchbook is here (http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=71080)

Shatterdome
May 4th, 2007, 06:23 PM
Both have a VERY heavy composition, but I guess that fits the idea mood, but doesn't allow for much information.

As said, the second one seems to be more of a formal composition, bordering on abstract...rather then an illustrative one...but, that coulda been the point ? ;)

Good stuff beside the nitpicks though :D

Hyaloclastics
May 10th, 2007, 06:02 AM
I like the feel of these but i think both pictures (especially the first one) look a bit squeezed in your current image dimensions.

MilesNoctis
May 10th, 2007, 06:36 AM
Like the second pic most, but as already said.. the foreground lines make no sense at all