sketches and underwear

[metalwinds]

hopefully you guys will like this stuff more than the previous stuff ive been posting.. .
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/pagecr.jpg
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/pagest.jpg
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/laywom.jpg

still tryin. . ..im not sure how to finish it (the rendering), so any feedback would be nice. also, i know the shadow is on the wrong side
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/underwoma.jpg

peace

[gasmask]

Im diggin these more but i think your still stuck with the same problems, lack of contrast in ur shading and your faces all look alike.

[metalwinds]

i dont worry about getting a wide range of values in my sketches because they are just sketches and im working out ideas. lately ive done a few more developed ones, but i dont normally. i dont know what to tell you about the faces.. .i thought i was making progress in that area but apparently im not. maybe this submission doesnt have the amount of different looking faces that some of my other subissions do. .i dont know.. .

[Samurai D]

Awesome sketches! A question about the "underwear girl... Is it just me, or does it look like she has a breast on her left wrist? :p

[Lost Dragon]

You are creating shapes and filling them with values.

Consider drawing your work as if you were sculpting it with value. The correct shapes will always emerge if you know where to place your values.

It's hard to understand, but once you do your work will reach the next level.

--
Lost Dragon

[metalwinds]

thanks guys. yeah dragon, i know what youre saying about the values thing. .. i have no problem doing it in ref drawing, but trying to do it from memory isnt something i have gotten real good at yet. workin on it though

peace