girl w guns (need help)

[robomaniac]

need some help on hand positioning

[naomiful]

Reference helps a lot, although the hands don't look too bad, maybe after staring at it the hand closest to us looks a hair thin at the knuckles, that's after staring. I'd say the main issue of this image is that it looks like she is in a contropasto pose, but her pelvis isn't following along with the waist and shoulder line.

So she is eternally a little uncomfortable xD

Nice work

[robomaniac]

yes.. i see now, that right leg is not in good position.. and hand is too small
... may be i also do 1 big gun instead of pistols

[Skunkitorium]

The hands look good in terms of keeping with the overall composition, but the actual position of her left hand looks painful and awkward, especially when you consider she's having to hold a big-ass gun in that hand.

[robomaniac]

still looking for optimal things... here is update
http://www.robomaniac.fatal.ru/files/tetka_wip2.jpg

[c4l3b]

the new gun at a tilted angle really helps this one. wow, at least to me its a huge difference.

[defcombeta]

great improvement. its stronger and the figure is more grounded. good work

j mac

[robomaniac]

this girl gives me inspiration
http://www.robomaniac.fatal.ru/files/morda2.jpg

[robomaniac]

update
http://www.robomaniac.fatal.ru/files/tetka_wip3.jpg

[Manly Man]

Give her an even bigger gun over her shoulder and a pistol at her hip, so she looks loaded. Note that I didn't read any of the rest of the thread, so please forgive me if I repeated anything.

1 more idea: if you want her to look like a part-robot, or like she's wearing a suit, give a simple design around the top of her forehead and/or her neck. It's just a suggestion.

[robomaniac]

update..
http://www.robomaniac.fatal.ru/files/tetka_wip4.jpg

realy i didnt like it, something wrong here.. but i cant see what

[AmontilladoAg]

This is really coming along, robo :teeth:

The only thing that might be throwing it slightly off is her posture, like naomiful mentioned earlier.. Seems like her hips should be more tilted.. Does this paintover help at all?

[robomaniac]

yes, i see now .. so i will have nightmare after i redo posture of this girl

[Quinster]

I wouldn't redo the whole thing. Seems like alot of work for something thats not terribly off. Just learn from it for the next time. I think the picture is well-done, over all.