[wip]cyberpunk would have been entry

[Avetice]

http://members.lycos.co.uk/avetice/wip.jpg

Well Im trying to work from my head on this one. I know there are still some anatomy issues to fix up, but those coils wrapped around him are giving me such a hard time. I'm trying to say more with less brushstrokes but those coils are hard to work out. Any suggestions about anything? Comments on color use?

[Muttonhead]

I am liking this piece very much. Great movement! The only bothersome thing to me is the moon reflection on the bottom, it is competing with the handkerchief on his face, which I think should be the brightest spot in the piece to draw your eye there first, so I recommend toning the brightness of that reflection down....

Other than that, rock on and lets see it finished!

-Muttonhead

[shadowrover]

Looks very interesting. I'm having a hard time understanding it though :( Maybe if you had the hands visible it would be clearer what's going on? Or maybe I'm not getting it cause I'm overlooking the obvious.

My only other comment is that it feels that his pants are sitting a bit too low.

Anyway, great piece - I'd love to see more of it.

- Shadowrover