looks like a jedi or something

[Szyslack]

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/aliensamuraijediguy.gif


i think i like this guy. maybe i'll exchange his light saber for something else.

[Pencil Soldier]

The arms are rather short..id say it needs more contrast..mopre definition and color in the lightsaber.. more folds on the robe...great expression and pose. :D

[negative clock]

OMG is that a bucket on his head?

[Hookflash]

Originally posted by negative clock
OMG is that a bucket on his head?

negative clock: I've noticed from several of your previous posts that you are a prick. Consider this to be a little bit of constructive criticism pertaining to your personality in general. I'm sorry, but I don't think there's much you can do to improve your worth as a human being. Perhaps you could seek therapy (although, extreme cases such as yourself often cannot benefit from it)...?

Szyslack: I personally like your drawing:)

[J.Peckham]

wow, cool idea. i like how you left the rest of the sketchpage...he kinda jumps off....the arms are funny but not too short or anything, i think you just need to see more of that back elbow, raised up high, parallel to the shoulder...look at this pose in the mirror. i'll be looking for you for now on, cool stuff!
JKP

[softdrawer]

nice drawing, with a nice background it would definitly kick more but heres the thing...

1st ... his right leg is way too forward, place it a little more behind because if he is leaning behind like that, it would cause him to fell on his buth or sit.

2nd ... the thing is not the lengh of his arm, its the angle.
Dont touch the left arm, just raise his right elbow.

3rd ... dont touch the sword, i like it that way man... really cool

good job man !

alx

[Szyslack]

thanks for the crits guys. i'll do more with this guy soon. this sketch was for the colors mostly.


ok back to work!

[Forge]

oh la hook flash don't take it so hard... fun is allowed here you know and i don't think it was naughty for the author... take it easy :D :D :D

[negative clock]

Originally posted by Hookflash


negative clock: I've noticed from several of your previous posts that you are a prick. Consider this to be a little bit of constructive criticism pertaining to your personality in general. I'm sorry, but I don't think there's much you can do to improve your worth as a human being. Perhaps you could seek therapy (although, extreme cases such as yourself often cannot benefit from it)...?

Szyslack: I personally like your drawing:)

hey, i never said i didnt like the draing. sheesh, but the bucket thing looks funny.

[Szyslack]

i can only assume you are talking about the little guy above the colored one. truthfully, i got the idea from playing tenchu 3. some of the guards in the game wear these stupid bucket-shaped helmets. it is pretty funny though.

[remedial]

btw its good to see some of the your prep concepts in the background, like the bucket guy. Cool to see that you're stretching the possibilites for this jedi's costume/cultural influences, as i can only assume that he is an... alien...*cough* :D g j

[Hookflash]

Originally posted by negative clock


hey, i never said i didnt like the draing. sheesh, but the bucket thing looks funny.

Well, I was reacting to a comment you made in another post (you basically told the person [an obvious newbie] that his drawing was "gay", without offering any constructive advice at all). Perhaps I overreacted, and I apologize. Still, I think a good general rule of thumb is "If you don't have anything constructive to say, shut the f*** up" (or something to that effect;)).