First piece - Zabuza Momochi

[Pixelsoldier]

:nohope:This is probably the first time anybody has seen my work on this site or on any other site cause im still a noob. Im only 13 and got my wacom and cs2 at christmas of 2006. I haven't really attempted to use it (dont know why) and I have only recently got inspiration to draw something with it. Well here is my first piece of work and even if it isn't finished I'd like to get some feedback with tips and suggetions. It is Zabuza Momochi from Naruto, I think he is 1 of my favorite characters. Hopefully i'll colour it when I've finished the lineart.

I had to make the image smaller to be able to be uploaded or else it would have been to big.

[Infinit]

you rly lack anatomy and you need practice with foreshortening a lot

but you are 13 and this is pretty good for that age
buy a book about human anatomy for artists and draw from it as well as from observation (real life people)

keep training and open a Sketchbook here to get critique
imo you have talent but now you'll have to WORK
a lot and there's no way around it

[novenus]

Please see the anatomy study thread... :)

[Rhythmus]

Like they said, you have talent for your age. I'm young as well, but I enjoy your art. Listen to these guys and gals. They're amazing. They can help you so much. Keep up the good work! I look forward to watching you progress.

[cucak]

for 13 is realy nice sketch
anatomy??? work on it
nice

my sketchbook (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=94480)
work in progres (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=94480)

[Nizza_waaarg]

2nd one looks best imo, the detail on the face is really nice. Im not that fond of the plain linework in the others, the second one seems to have more variation in line thickness i think too. As has already been said, anatomy needs work but great effort. Keep it up.