Ember Pinup Pose

[brokencow]

http://threed.nu/gallery/data/media/4/ember.jpg
My character in a pinup pose. Bleh...

I've uploaded more stuff here

http://www.threed.nu/gallery/

[I.was.ink]

Looks good man. The one thing that throws me off is that I dont know if she's flying through the air, or if she's leaning on something. I think its the flying, but there's no shadow or anything to indicate it.

I checked out your link and really liked your hooded concept guys. You've got some nice stuff.

One question about that site. Is it owned by you, or can other people register and upload onto it?

[brokencow]

It's my site, you can upload but only with my premission. But i don't think i'll be doing that anytime soon, inless it's fan art, but i never get any of that.

[Jason Manley]

where is her right leg? youve got paul mccartneys wife there.

its rendered well...but the pose makes very little sense from the waste down. she is falling over...like its a half action pose and a half seated pose....i would suggest doing some gesture sketches first before finishing your image so that you can work out the dynamics of what she is doing....do what she is doing yourself...you will see what i mean.

;)


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[brokencow]

Actually, i've done all that. I even took pictures, so it's very acurate. The thing is, there is nothing to tell the viewer what is going on. I just couldn't think of anything to add in the backround. She is flying upwards. Her other leg is gone because of the shape i wanted from the pose. Pinup and all. I dunno, i will try to add something in the back round, suggestions?

[Jason Manley]

flying or not..photos or not...its not working. background...just think about what she is doing and where she is doing it.

[I.was.ink]

Well, since you said she's flying up, the first thing that popped into my head was her jumping off the roof of a building. Kinda like she's chasing after someone, and she jumped off the building and we catch her in mid air. Give it a very dynamic three point perspective.

Jazz it up some. :cool:

oh yeah!

P.S I registered to your site not knowing if it was yours or not. I wont upload anything, now that I know. Sorry...

btw, who is your host?

[sparth]

the most interesting thing that struck me is the shadow color of the right arm. very nice tone. very smart.
concerning the pose and compo, i rather like it.

good work bc
:D

[brokencow]

each time i look at it, i think it looks better.
I think it's just confusing with out a backround.
Adding in a BG now.