rider:finalstage!!!:advice please!!!

[capone]

Just about finished the sketch, if anything jumps out to you as being wrong please say. Also, not sure how to colour this one. Its A3 and not the best kind of paper to use my normal marker method. Am thinking of pencil shading it and then taking it into photoshop, does anyone do this?, does it work well and could you possibly show me a example?, thanks

http://www.caponeart.com/DELETErider3.jpg

[Triton]

Cool sketch. The first thing that strikes me is that the back part of the left horse seems to long.

[capone]

Really?, anyone else think so has anyother advice?

thanks

[shadowrover]

Feels like the rump on the left horse is not big enough and a bit more curve to the spine would help to give the horse more "action". Hmm, a slightly bigger rump on the right horse might help too. Not sure though. just a thought.

- Shadowrover

[tomi]

the front legs of the right horse are wrong...i think by now it's to late to say that...right?