Bikini critics pleez

[DeeJ]

My latest sketch.
i posted this earlier but i guess it was in the wrong forum coz i was made aware of this fact.
C+C alwayz welcome.
Thanx...

[JAG.]

looks good so far, but definitely gotta get more aggressive with the shading. the shadows need more intensity.

the shadow along the side of her body is much darker than say on her far leg or chest.. compare it to what you've done. keep it up - JAG

[novenus]

Her torso is a bit too long, and her legs are incorrect in their curvature along the gluteus maximus and biceps femoris, vastus lateralis... I would suggest that you draw the posture in proportion before tackling the details.

[DeeJ]

thanx for the tips, they're much appreciated. i'll definitely try being more aggressive with shading and also work on the proportions. i haven't studied art at school or anywhere else, so i feel i'm lacking in the knowledge department when it comes to anatomy .gluteus maximus and biceps femoris, vastus lateralis
thanx again

[infans]

gluteus maximus = the but...

biceps femoris, vastus lateralis = the rear muscle of teh upper leg, vastus lateralis means its just the outside part of it....

[DeeJ]

thanx infans...