archangel third set crits needed!

[Scratched Glass]

hey all its me again. I got reference of my buddy ryan tonight, he wanted to be archangel so i prob through this up in about 2 hours. All from my head which i think is apparent. this upper body that you can see seems a bit off i think. lighting wise as well. soo anything you guys can think of would help a ton, id like to spend a few more hours on it before it goes in the finished section. I also kinda made his wings up since they always seem to be different an no one know the exact layout of his metal wings =)

http://www.rsad.edu/~dgreco/archdraft.jpg

thakns guys!

[Swedish Chef]

I think it's coming along great. However, I think the top of the head should be lowered a bit. Looks a little poofy. But that's one hell of a start!!!!

[Scratched Glass]

after takn a break and looking at it. im gonna have to rehash alot of it. theres alot wrong right now. esp with his torso. its to short at one point and off on another /sigh.

[kasai]

Adding to the first crit, I think the his left shoulder seems a bit too short in relation to the other shoulder. Then again it could be the shadows fooling my eye:p Otherwise i think its coming along nicely.

[thomasaurus]

Is this the same guy you referenced for your Beast piece?

This is great....please do Wolverine

[Scratched Glass]

thanks i agree the shoulder is a bit off. i may actually have to shoot some body refernce for this one. as he doesnt have large clothing covering it. but um its a different guy. they both wear glasses. so i could see how it looks somewhat similar. hehe wolverine might be interesting =)