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darkcult
July 23rd, 2003, 10:27 PM
Just an experimental character design that is kind of a shit and I lost enthusiasm to push it any further …
(He is holding a hand-flame thrower, for close combat (“face to face” skin melting he he :barf: )
http://www.portfolios.com/Pics/magda/magda_4_p.JPG
Looking for some feedback,
so C&C more than welcome…
Tedsuo
July 24th, 2003, 12:47 AM
I like the mask he's wearing. It's not quite clear it's a flame thrower though. Maybe if we saw the canister on his back it would read better?
:)
chao
July 24th, 2003, 02:10 AM
wou... nice design! i like the face too.. great!:chug: yeap.. agree with Tedsuo about the weapon.. it's nice though!
R_M
July 24th, 2003, 02:59 AM
Agree with tedsuo on the flame trower... it looks a bit like my vacumcleaner. you could make a tiny bluish flame at the end of it, and that could cast some cool higlights on the mask...
the mask is really really cool, even if I thin it is ti close to the face or like he has no nose.
I like it, and I think it is worth finishing, if not see it as a job you don't like but that you have to do cause your boss needs asap.
oh one more thing. Nazis where a bunch of assholes, but they had some really good designers behind them so they could have all kinds of medals and insignias. Do some research, and come up with some medals of your own.
syco26
July 24th, 2003, 03:08 AM
I like this pic.I do agree witj the others though about the flame thrower.
I think maybe if you just added a pilot flame to the bottom of the barrel it would be enough to give the right impresion.
Good work though
TOPO
July 24th, 2003, 03:15 AM
Mmmm... it reminds me too much to Major Maxim, a character from Danger Girl comics, the mask the rubber tubes, the hat... mmmm :confused:
darkcult
July 24th, 2003, 08:23 AM
Thanks----:chug:--Tedsuo, chao, R_M, syco26, TOPO
Yeah, for the mask I went for insect like design and the initial idea was that behind the mask is not really a human at all…
Thanks for the cool ideas – looks like it is going to be a team work after all- ;) (you and me, he he)
P.S. Major who???
Any more thoughts or comments--> welcome of course.
Strang
July 24th, 2003, 11:13 AM
Most flame throwers i have seen have had an extended barrel. I think it would be rather hot holding a "pistol" type flame thrower, like you have illustrated here.
I like the whole character design though. The jacket, head/mask, and hat.
Keep em coming...
-Strang
bwkeough
July 24th, 2003, 12:25 PM
I like this very much, too. Great concept and execution. I agree with the crits tho, you can push this a little farther with some research. When you're designing the fuel tank, will it be pressurized gasoline or napalm, or is it some kind of compressed liquid gas like propane? Is it going to be a realistic size or twice as big as the guy carrying it?
it reminds me of the firemen in Ray Bradbury's "Farenheit 451" --the guys who organize the book burnings.
I look forward to more!
darkcult
July 24th, 2003, 02:54 PM
THANKS---------->bwkeough,Strang
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