riders:stage2 !!! advice please

[capone]

Quite a lot has changed since last time, still more defining needed. Is this picture working?, is there something clearly wrong?, please comment. Thankyou.

p.s my website has been "revamped" :)
http://www.caponeart.com/DELETErider2.jpg

[Number 28]

I think the eyes on the left horse need to be smaller as it's supposedly further away, but the eyes are bigger.

I guess it could just be the characteristics of the horse though - s'up to you.

Also, the guy falling off the horse on the right would perhaps look better if he was less symmetrical. His arms and legs are pretty much the same position as one another.

Will look nice coloured.