Portrait

[Alister]

First post! I feel so out of place here... everyone is leaps and bounds greater than what I can do, but I suppose I can only improve, right?

I've spent several hours on this, and to me it seems finished. I've posted it on other sites, which yielded some asspats. I've shown it to one person several times as I've worked on it and he's given me some good crits, but I don't want to bother him every time I draw something. I need to stop typing now.

http://www.alister.riftwarp.com/images/art/inty2rev3.jpg
If it matters, this is (http://www.alister.riftwarp.com/images/art/inty2.jpg) what it was like before I received any crits.

[emily g]

Hey, it looks a lot better. Your improvements have been good.
I would look at the eyes. They look different from each other.
Also, the irises seem too close to the inner corners of the eyes, or maybe they are just too big.

[Shortydiva]

Is this supposed to be some kind of pseudo-anime kind of look? If it is, it's nicely done. His eyes are wobbly and one looks bigger than the other. The hairline is really WEIRD. It's as if they're clashing at each other in an attempt to take over most of the head. His shoulders are angled too far down. They need to be a little more "straight-across", but not too much. I like how you did the nose.

Don't rush on the stars next time!

[JasonUK]

I think if you drawed that freehand without tracing it's really good. I would love to see that painted up. I bet I would look really good. The eyes look alittle off though and try adding a little more contrast in the shadows.

[JeanLucPicard]

is it something from Star Trek? I'd reconize the uniform anywhere ^^
which captain?

and as stated, more contrast whould be nice
and where is the 'after u recieved crits' skectch?
:yayca: