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Devere
March 29th, 2007, 06:30 PM
Here's a little truck I designed for the vehicle design class in my program last semester (note I decided to go the route of a product designer.) that I decided to try render in photoshop. Note it's my first time rendering a vehicle in photoshop. so critics are more than Welcome. thanks in advance look forward to hearing from you.

JAG.
March 30th, 2007, 10:23 AM
well, i think it loks great so far. but this seems like step 4 of 10.. you're not done yet.

the wheels are nice, a bit of BMW in there ;) i think ive used the same tutorial you used to make these.. heh.

whats lacking now are the details, the cut lines and creases. those are wht make it 'realistic'.

but somethin about the perspective or lighting on the front wheel/tire isnt working.

keep at it though.. nice lil design - JAG

Devere
March 30th, 2007, 10:30 AM
thanks for the comments Jag, your right it definately needs some work on the details, need to work those out any suggestions. and yeah the front wheel thing probably gonna design my own set to put on there.

JAG.
March 30th, 2007, 02:48 PM
well, i think you should extend the wheel well crease all along the side and to the back of the truck.
maybe the design of your wheels can be incorporated into the theme of the truck.
and whered the headllights go?? ;) - JAG