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easydoesit
March 28th, 2007, 12:36 PM
Been a long time since I showed some work.

This is a Variety of Stuff Some Conceptual and some Illustration.

Could use some overall feedback as to what may stand out to you all as an area for improvement. Haven't had a quality critique in sometime so please tell me what you think.

http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/ZTQLDM/Hero_Cover.jpg
http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/ZTQLDM/LittleVillage.jpg
http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/GNWHKA/Pirate01.jpg
http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/GNWHKA/Bird02.jpg
http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/GNWHKA/Mill01.jpg
http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/PINUP/Busted.jpg
http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/Pixel%20Art/VV2_INtro1and2.jpg
http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/Pixel%20Art/VV2_Boxhot.jpg
http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/Pixel%20Art/VV2_LogoSmall.jpg

Elwell
March 28th, 2007, 12:54 PM
http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/PINUP/Busted.jpg

That cast shadow is much too big. If she's right up against the door it should basically be a dark outline (think flash photography). Now it looks like she's in a her-shaped hole.

misael
March 28th, 2007, 01:07 PM
Awsome pirate! A bout the super flag man pic, The hand holding his wrist seems a little wierd. I would pose it a little diferent.

Kredepops
March 30th, 2007, 02:51 AM
Yeah I really like the pirate too. You have a unique cartoony style.

http://www.illustrationandartwork.com/images/zoom/Pixel%20Art/VV2_INtro1and2.jpg

You need to work a bit on anatomy though - the guy holding the spear is standing pretty awkwardly - his torso should be turned more toward the right and so should his legs.

Lighting and colours are gorgeous though!!

ICH
March 30th, 2007, 05:10 AM
Please, can you post a big version of 3 Virtua Villagers? The light and environment are so intresting!