lady in red - c&C

[lauri]

C&C for colors and design? and what should i make out of the axe, you see on her shoulder
thnx

http://www.hot.ee/loommusic/leidi.jpg

[Ant4d]

Tere:)

Concerning colors I think you should try use more color variations. And maybe some more reflection lights or shadows etc(to get more depth think how light works).

hand needs some definition(that is if your objective is to have a human looking hand).

Torso and head seems too flat. I think it is because of the viewers angle(that is rather a matter of taste, dont take it as crit.)


Regards,
anton

[Marie]

I really like how that is coming out. I love the color scheme so far.

Something caught my eye about her pose, so I stood up in front of a mirror and tried to imitate it, and it hurt. Above her waist she is facing directly to the side, and below its angled towards the viewer. I think her upper torso should be angled just slightly more toward the viewer. Or her pelvic area angled more to the side she is facing.

Otherwise I realy like it so far :)

Marie

[Tedsuo]

The colors are good, except I think her skin is a bit grey. I agree with the others about the pose. Also, her hand looks a bit odd, like you haven't drawn the fingers yet.

Overall the design is good though. Keep it up! :)

[lauri]

thnx

jep, the finger are missing - so the hand is looking now quite odd, but not for long.

the torso-angel-turnpoint problem is really there, didnt noticed it until now. lets see how does it comes along

värvid meelega, anton:)