some unfinished sketches (Big dl)

[remedial]

Hey all. This is my first actual art post, just a few drawings from one of my more recent sketchbooks. I'm 16, close to 17, was just wondering if i could get some feedback on how i'm doing and how i can get better. For the time being i suck at dig. painting - any tips? thnx :)

http://www.geocities.com/snotboy14/oldbeardedfighter.txt http://www.geocities.com/snotboy14/virulentreg.txt http://www.geocities.com/snotboy14/virulentcolor.txt

[Jeff Gran]

Cool, man, it looks pretty good so far. I'm no expert but I think what you need to do is just more detail. Set your original sketch layer to low opacity and try to paint enough light into it that you don't need the linework anymore. Zoom way in to paint and zoom out to see how you're doing.

[remedial]

hey thanx! i do rely on the linework layer a little too much when painting.-but i'll keep at it ;)