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fungi
July 20th, 2003, 11:34 AM
sketch I did this morning, not really for any projects just something i did for fun :) plz give crit



http://homepage.ntlworld.com/a.facey/sketch%202.jpg

:chug:

thomasaurus
July 20th, 2003, 11:51 AM
ow.

J.Peckham
July 20th, 2003, 12:13 PM
sweet. nice blood spray.my only crit would be his bicep area is a little too stumpy, i think the elbow and the wrist are always the same width across the top, no matter how huge you are.
JKP

Jeff Gran
July 20th, 2003, 03:34 PM
Hey, it looks awesome to me! but if you want a crit I would say the kicking guy's pose is a little stiff...I don't know how to get a more dynamic effect, but I think you could do a better job of making it seem like a fast action pose. Also, It seems to me like his hips would be turning away as he kicks, and it seems like his back foot would be coming toward us...so maybe a hint of the highlight on his other heel would help it be more spatial. the other guy's pose is awesome, though. I especially like the hands.

endregan
July 20th, 2003, 03:44 PM
would hurt the guy kicking as well!! if you kick like that your toes would break especially since you display he has kicking force to kick off a guys head. :P. love the drawing though! (the foot just bothers me :))

Rico-xx
July 21st, 2003, 01:50 AM
Excellent drawing... a little stiff perhaps, but let's not be too picky :-)