B- Movie Zombiessssss

[Dodge]

Been trying to incorporate more technique in my colour pieces recently. This is for a game website non profit though. its pretty much finished about 4 hours and i doubt ill go back to it.

comments crits welcomed it all helps for future pieces.
the compression on these washed out some of the colour here ya go.

The main piece
http://www.thedumpvalve.com/zombpng3.png


And cropped for a banner
http://www.thedumpvalve.com/zombiebanner2.png

[haiku]

hehe, looks good. Reminds me of these old horror movies.
especially the fonts you used ;)

Well, i'm having a problem with the anatomy of the zombies right hand. It seems shorter than the other.

Otherwise, it's pretty cool. Good colouring, i really like it. :)

[Dodge]

haiku: Thanks, yeh i wanted the hand to look almost lame but yeh i think it is a bit short.

[Neole]

Nice colors and zombie! And now for some crits -

I would have liked more contrast in some places, more values in the skin color. The sky and ground behind the zombie are almost the same height - that might not be a good idea composition wise. The abdo muscles are too defined for a zombie, a glimpse of intestines would have been nicer. Teeth could be yellowish instead of that white. The background building is too horizontally straight to add to the drama. The font could so with a little gradient fill. I especially like the orange ground!

[Dodge]

Neole: Thanks for the comments i hear what your saying on most of those, oops managed to miss what you said about stomach thats on the next change.

Made the first changes to it,
http://www.thedumpvalve.com/zombiesmallbc.png

Comments crits welcomed, cmon!!

[Yaseck]

Hmm..
He's kinda plastic...
Put on him some texture? Can You?