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HardcorePixxX
July 18th, 2003, 08:05 PM
http://hpx1.free.fr/_stuff/nat_sobig.jpg
this WASN'T meant to be an ashley wood fanart.
anyway, that's supposed to be some kind of natalie portman with long hair staring at a big robot with an even bigger stuff.
any crits ?
guess there are issues with the lighting and the girl's anatomy.
any crit is welcome :)
ashley rulez.

Elwell
July 18th, 2003, 08:20 PM
What, if anything , is she wearing? On the one hand, the brushwork on her body gives the effect of wrinkled fabric. On the other, the color could be read as skin, and there's no indication of cuffs, seams, or any other clothing detail.

I like the ductwork style robot, but why does it have a breast growing out of its armpit?:p

endregan
July 18th, 2003, 08:26 PM
awesome pic haha. seems a bit faded though. i really like it. i dont know why she is in that posture, wouldnt be too comfortable or that good for an attack, slow her down :P. nice though I love you hardcorepixx :).

p.s. the robot is rocking man :). its like the latest thing hehe.

p.s. the text ruins it.

jrr
July 18th, 2003, 08:33 PM
natalie? oh my!

HardcorePixxX
July 18th, 2003, 10:20 PM
elwell, actually she's supposed to be wearing some kind of vpc/latex/vynil suit. i'll have to work on the texture a lot more to fix that.
seams would be a fine addition. i'll add some, maybe gloves ?
about the nipple thing, man, that's a badly made shemale bot :)

endregan, i agree with you but i think i'll keep the biaaatch pose. here's the real story behind that pic : she's amazed by the size of the droid's d***, that's why she says 'so big...'. not the most subtle story, i know... so when i did that pose, i was thinking 'sexy and amazed' more than 'action and ready to kill' =P about the text, i'll try to change the font, maybe add a white background ? maybe make it look more comics style ?

jrr, yeah dude ! the natalie series is on its way :) waiting for yours now.

davi
July 18th, 2003, 10:55 PM
i did a natalie referenced portrait once... when you start a full thread in the finished section i'll post mine

I.was.ink
July 19th, 2003, 12:23 AM
This looks great. Sure it has its little things.

But I like it. I also love Ashley's work. I even have a thread in the sketches section I just started.

Please do more! :nana

sepulveda
July 19th, 2003, 07:45 AM
why is the text there?
is there a reason?

It just keeps bothering me everytime I look at the piece.... nice lighting on the bot.....

hethe
July 20th, 2003, 11:07 PM
HARDCORE.

Don't know if you remember me but I've got to lend my support particularly in light of the critical comments about the 'faded' nature of the pic and the presense of the text. Of course it's a matter of opinion but I'm in favor of the 'faded' look this piece has. The absense of strong darks adds something for me. The text too adds a lot. Maybe it's the designer in me but I find text yummy. Anyway, had to speak my mind.

.hethe

ps. reading too much Harry Potter ... starting to write like Rowling ...