dark queen rebirth

[bellas]

any chill travel the world and the reflected dark a door by where the lady rebirth, seizing quickly of its old one dwelled in the stop of mountains between lightning and a cloud of
the dark that I caress the valley.

-------------well my last job, more time to paint I'm a slow to paint my pictures ^u,u^. please more crits. sorry for my english. see you
medium- Photopaint
original size- 2400 x 4400 aprox.
http://www.iespana.es/bellasart/dibujos/dama_oscura_gfx.jpg

[zeroe]

looks great
i think some more contrast wouldnt hurt
and i also think the green portal is a bit clashy with the rest of the picture. but good stuff nontheless

[cucaracha]

the only crit I can give is that the skin and her wings are looking pretty flat. add some dramatic lighting and contrast to them :)

cu

[Cassandra]

Vaya, me gusta mucho!!

Creo que vas mejorando a cada nueva ilustración.
En esta imagen quizás lo que menos me gusta es el remolino verde, no sé qué idea tenías al pintarlo pero parece fango, y creo que quizás debería parecer más etéreo y luminoso, más fundido con el cielo.

También te aconsejaría aclarar el fondo en general, de este modo la chica ganará protagonismo.

Por lo demás, me encanta la imagen. ¡Felicidades! :D

[bellas]

thanks for your comments ^n,n^
cassandra tienes razon, el remolino disgusta a mucha gente, suelo usar colores muy raros, haber si mejoro el tema del color de mis imagenes pues me cuesta mutxo
sacar los tonos que yo quiero un saludo :) see youuu

[marc_taro]

http://www.marctaro.com/brutalpaintover.jpg

Here's a really rough paintover - just a guide...I think the comment I have is the composition is very distracting...

There are all kinds of *tangents* created by the skirt and the background, the toe and the litte city...the lightining and the tower..these are overlapping in a confusing way. As the girl is the main subject, I suggest removing or downplaying the background...make sense?

my sketch is very weak, but I hope you get what I'm going for...
marc

[J.Peckham]

i agree with marc about the comp. also the fabric is rendered so well. i think more value range on the skin to match would be good.
JKP

[bellas]

I like his idea in the composition, I have cut the image that tapeworm by layers and I have organized . tomorrow I go away of vacations but when i return, I repainting the picture and it will show you to the result to him? thank you for your help its teach me so much mmpttt well, one forgot, also will try to change the color to me of vortice green. :)
new version (http://www.iespana.es/bellasart/detalles/dama_oscura_version.jpg)