Into the Wilderness

[tarrzan]

..here's a concept I've been working on that's driving me nuts! I cant figure out what this peace really is, other than a big ol' junkman running onto the forest...of more junk!:needle: any ideas?? thanks fo' lookin'!

[aph]

Junkman? Where is he?

Anyways, stuff on the left is love. The right side hasn't been worked out enough and the silhouette at the front really distracts, the shapes you've got going are really cool. Don't delete it or anything silly. Parts of it are really nice.

Maybe this will help =).

http://www.imaginefx.com/02287754332787410211/creating-beauty-out-of-chaos.html

Don't despair, just take a few days away from it and come back with fresh enthusiasm.

[nickmarshallvfx]

Well this has got some real potential. I would suggest defining form and adding detail to the foreground, and working something interesting into the right, coz at the moment the right side is very flat compared to the left. I think if you do that, you will be able to see what you can do to make it a nice finished piece. Nice work!

Nick

[Unknown Target]

Wow, I really like this. The silghoette to the left is great, but as it moves farther to the right (and non-detailed) section of the piece, it becomes distracting and sticks out. IMHO, you should either blend it in more, add some detail to it as it moves across (which would look good if you had, say, an intrepid adventurer holding up a lantern, illuminating a small section of the foreground), or add some detail to that section of the background.