Highschool Brawling Club

[Balin]

My Wife's first webcomic. The first twenty pages or so were just released. Take a look.

http://www.bluehairmanga.com/HighschoolBrawlingClub/Manga.html

[Nexus]

Hmmm, not a bad storyline but the drawings could use a little help. I don't even have beef with the anime style. It's things like misplacement of facial features, really incorrect anatomy (not purposely so in a stylistic way), erroneous perspective, etc. I really don't have time to sit and crit every page but in my quick run through I counted at least 6 major anatomy issues or some other problem on every page....not just some, all of them. Granted, making an entire webcomic is a huge task and all the drawings cant be winners. I admire your wife's persistence and storytelling but she might want to really study her anatomy, even anime characters are loosely based on actual human forms. Thanks for sharing and tell her to keep practicing, dont settle, keep pushing further.

[Infinit]

you have to post a pic directly into the forum (read the forum rules)