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Jackwhat
February 27th, 2007, 03:28 PM
Couple of character sheet wips. Basically posting to get feedback on anatomy and the way the clothes are hanging, cuz it feels a little out of place.

Opinions wanted.

(posted here as opposed the the critique area, move if you see fit.)

any crits / comments needed :heart: (apologies in advance for image size)

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h91/Jackwhat/hymnwip.jpg

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h91/Jackwhat/emma.jpg

NathanLong
February 27th, 2007, 09:41 PM
Unless his collar is undone, it should stick closer to his neck. His lapels also look like they start too far out from the neck. It makes it look like his suit doesn't fit and that he has really overdeveloped trapezius muscles.

Frostblade
February 28th, 2007, 12:13 AM
For being small?

Needs some folds and creases in the clothes. Maybe more seams.