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MaZzuk
February 26th, 2007, 03:25 AM
just desided to finish at least one painting) :360_old:
Rascar Capac
February 26th, 2007, 04:02 AM
cool - I think a couple of things on this would make it a bit more interesting
-the "tails" are pointing to the lower right whereas they could be more in the direction of the light helping to push the perspective and motion(as in the bubbles)....they could even be longer and more organic...with more swirling etc...
-You might want to brighten up the left side just a tiny bit so we dont lose the front of the ship. And adding a bit of depth/atmosphere/texture will bring it to life. Right now the left side of the piece is just a blank wall...and the gradient from left to right is too obvious and clean.
-You can also push the light hitting the back of this thing...some nice kicks to pop it...
-Not sure what the middle of the ship is made off? is that a glass cockpit? its a bit ambiguous and needs to be resolved.
hope that helps
MaZzuk
February 27th, 2007, 09:20 AM
Thx for your comments) it is really helpful. I`ll try to use these notices in my next work..
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