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anisean
February 23rd, 2007, 05:32 PM
This is second posting of my works.
It's image of night view in the city.
Police on the crafts are looking for something.
I spent a day for this one.
Thanx!
Mattinian
February 24th, 2007, 03:04 AM
Pretty good. are those ice gliders of some sort ? If not it looks like they`re
scratching that neatly polished shiny surface... It won`t hurt if you crank up the contrast in the crafts
themselves, right now my attention is drawn to the brightness of the buildings.
PS
there are no police sirens :]]
ElvisMcVegas
February 24th, 2007, 03:16 AM
I think the background could have a little bit more going on with it, like more signs and buildings and people, since there isnt that much going on in the forground.
Rizo
February 24th, 2007, 06:14 AM
Nice image, but i think you could have play more with the geometry of the buildings as you did with the geometry of the ships, right now they seem to boxy, also all the lights inside have the same brightnes, probably if you shut down some of the offices it will look more natural/real.
Rizo
anisean
February 24th, 2007, 09:59 AM
Thank you for all the conments.
I have retouched as you ask for.
But it's still tricky to make depth.
Anyway I will keep on going on it.
Cheers!!
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