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sjoerd
July 12th, 2003, 07:53 PM
before

http://www.webenga.com/blood/GFX/Flowercoler.jpg

now;

http://www.webenga.com/blood/GFX/Flowercoler2.jpg

Oke toned down the colers farther away from the "camera", also added more coler to spice it up a bit.
I also fixed the ankle.

again crits verry welcome!!
Simplistics
July 13th, 2003, 02:01 AM
I love the foreshortening on this! Great job!
davi
July 13th, 2003, 09:10 AM
very cool!

the colors don't work for me though. i think there needs to be a shift in color on the figure the further he goes back.

Also some of the toes just looked slapped on, and the heel looks kind of bonky. I think you could put alittle more detail into them both

The leg is amazing though!
sjoerd
July 13th, 2003, 10:25 AM
Thx!

what coler do you suggest?

and another question what do you think of the shading?
Ian Mack
July 13th, 2003, 12:53 PM
alright! Great job colouring. You're doing better than I am. :D

Davi is right about the ankle tho. It looks like it's a lump growing on the side of his leg as opposed to being the bone underneath the skin.

The shading on the left foot doesn't look very good tho...makes it look to rectangular.

As for colours, I'd say make the green less vibrant as if goes back to the BG.
sjoerd
July 20th, 2003, 06:57 AM
* Updated *
majinpunisher
July 24th, 2003, 03:17 PM
I concur with Davi.

His right foot looks great, so I think that you need to spend some time attempting to replicate it on his left foot, with the forshortening.

Something with the ankle and heel breaks up the fun exaggerated feel that the right foot gives. I dunno, granted it still says "Intermediate Noob" under my name, but I figure you might want to consider it. I'm still in college for this stuff myself.

-Majin Punisher
softdrawer
July 28th, 2003, 04:20 PM
lol... i love this one !
hyphen
July 28th, 2003, 06:41 PM
great point of view. i'm just curious about his left knee, it looks like there's a bullet lodged into it.
sjoerd
July 29th, 2003, 10:58 AM
hehe a bullet noo noo,

i didnt work it out really de to lack of time :/ looking for a room in the town im gonna study, ahwell..

it's supposed to be pimple of some sort but it looks a bit weird exactly in the middle..

i gonna fiddle around with this drawing when ifound my room or maybe between things when i have time,

thanks for the nice comments everyone!