Kaelyn

[designthedream]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u148/creampuf_photo/kaelyn.jpg

This is my D&D character. I took a crazy amount of time to study and practice (among other life things..too many to list) painting techniques and the human form. This picture took several months (on and off as the muse went) and many revisions as I worked to find something that I could post and move forward with in learning how to improve from there. Trust me this piece means a new direction in my art and it would be worth it to make not just this piece but all pieces after it better.

There is something about her that puzzles me and I'm hoping for some critiques and advice so that I can improve.

Don't hold back the crits or the applause :wink:

THANK YOU!!!!!!!

[NathanLong]

The face and hair are brilliant, though her eyes might be a little too big, but you seem to start losing some confidence as you get to the neck and the arm and the swell of the breast. The collar bone does not looked placed correctly.

This is a tough angle to draw the body from, so it's understandable. It looks like you tried many times to get it right during the painting of it, but this is one step too late. The painting will go much easier if you have the anatomy down in the drawing stage.

Those crits aside, I see a lot of talent here. It is a very attractive image. Keep going with this.