new sketches!!jefflong-the descent

[J.Peckham]

this is one of the main characters from a book called the descent he's a guide for some scientists going into hell.
he had to wear goggles underground because the scientists lights were too bright. i need feedback on the way i built the character, i guess. he looks funny to me.
JKP

http://jpeckham.250free.com/hadalguard.jpg

[thomasaurus]

The legs need more work, they're not workin for me. Are those horns on his head?

[J.Peckham]

yep i see it now, he doesn't have a stomache either, does he? okay next time i'll try harder.
JKP

[freddy7133d]

hey john,
that looks pertty good...but I do have a few critiques....

the left hand (on his left) looks off..
and the gun bends up slightly...you should get feed back befor you color...and:D his face is a bet too rounded makes him look less tough...sorry for all the critiques, I know its just a concept sketch...but it still looks like pertty soild concept...
keep posting.....

fred:waves: