Demoness

[Linguar]

Hello Everyone,

New here O_o;

I've been drawin' the past three years, mainly started seriously in on it the past year..

Just curious to get some feedback on a pic of a Demoness (at least that's the idea behind her)

Her left hand on it is a bit wack, so it kinda threw a few things off, I'll probably end up fixing it ^^; -- it's just positioned wrong and shaped a bit badly.

http://www.rpgsource.net/linguar/images/artwork/m_neo_sk_044-10.jpg

I think I'd also better fix the legs while I'm at it, they're probably not meant to be two thicknesses :P

Anyway, I'm just lookin' for some solid crits, been wonderin' myself lately where I need to focus on, and what my weak points are. -- Hard to fix something if you're unaware ^_^

Let me know what you think, and if there's anything you can say to help, please do.

Thanks,

-Linguar

[gasmask]

Hey, i think u got a good idea hear but it seems really flat, thats mainly because you have a consistant line weight thats very thick, when ur drawing ur gonna wanna vary the line quality, darker lines are mainly used to pop out certain shapes and also use value instead of line to show where muscles go.........but its pretty good and i like it so keep practicen.

[cycrincy]

i agree somewhat with what gasmask says but also try to round off the left shoulder (my left her right);) i think uve got somtin here tho so keep drawin and dont stop