dragonfly wannabe

[lauri]

hi
im almost new now in here, but still got something to sheare with you.
been working whit this one for some time now, probably when i look it after a coupel of months ill wouldn like it, and will do it again, but still -

http://www.hot.ee/loommusic/5.jpg

some pointers now, i can take hard critics - big man me already, yes yes:p

[3bleadpencil]

not a bad start.....go darker in my opinion.....really punch out the detail:)....don't start over....just keep refining it......you waste too much time if you start over....and it's hard to learn that way if you don't look at your mistakes.......and mistakes usually are discoveries that many artists use time and again in their works.
Regards

[battlemonkey]

my gosh thats beautiful, love the mood of the piece, as for crits, ur tones are pretty similar when it comes to the figure, its hard to pick out different layes and such of the figure. its needs more punch to define the character. great imagination. i wonder how he/she'll look from another angle~!
:D

[syntax]

Good work - composition may need some attention, but it looks loke your on the right track with rendering. Maybe a little more contrast.

Cheers matey,
syn

[lauri]

thnx all
contarst is a issue here- i agree on that, so lets keep on working, but not right now, lets wait some time, then its more easier to point out weakspots.

thnx again

[cycrincy]

im in awww

[Jan]

Looks really special,cool insekt-orc!
Maybe the outlines could be stronger,but i don't know what size it is normally.
The upper wing looks milky compared with the lower.