update!! :)

[altrodesi]

well I still need help....Im still working on this picture so....any suggestions will help...as you can see I TRYED to put more detail in some areas.....im still learning:) I really did not plan this picture...it was a doodle at first.I like the way it tured out but I dont think its done....so if anyone could help that would be great. Thx:)http://i18.tinypic.com/4g69kxk.jpg

[Serena-]

this is good over all, my suggestion is you sharpen up the smoothness of your colors. It seems a bit separated now, no idea how to better put it. But the idea is great, the color is nice, it's coming along well :)