My Murcielago

[samrayiii]

Free time for modeling definetly doesn't come cheap

Im really eagar to get this car done considering I feel I can get the rest of the modeling done in one more sitting

I still got the door, lights, tires and back end parts to throw in.
If you have any advice at all please rip my piece apart.

Please do not hold back !!!

Thanks !!!

P.S. I'll try and put up the finished product real soon

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/alamb.jpg

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/blamb-2.jpg

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/g.jpg

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/f.jpg

[samrayiii]

Well, one thing leads to another and 1 week turns into a month but i guess no one cares.

340 views and not one comment, either the models I had wasn't enough to go on, or my stuff is highly mediocre cause usually the really good and the really bad seem to get responses.

Oh well. hopefully I can get some feedback this time.

I did this in 3ds max around 15 hrs, off and on

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/lamb1.jpg

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/lamb2.jpg

[iamreceCrit]

i hope the images i drew on show up in the post.

red: jeff said the tires are wider in the back. also the depth the tires go into the wheel well should come flush with the side of the car. like the pull the tires outward so they kinda line up with the car body.
green: you got some pinching and bulging going on. i think u might need to go in and optimize/ clean up the wires there.
blue: theres probably some polys that need to be seamed, cause the render shows through the car. those white spots should not be there. if its not the seams try having the polys double sided (it'll increase render time, but it might fix it).

other than that though mann, its really awesome. i'd like to see a wireframe render also (not with meshsmooth iterations tho.) i wanna see what u can do wit some crazy mechanical designs. you're starting to get proficient with technical skill, i wanna see your personal style start coming through.

[samrayiii]

Thanks guys I new I could count on yall. imma start cleaning that stuff yall pointed out later today.

Side note(s)

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/g-2nd.jpg
-Those buldges are either side lights or a side label. Feel free to debate me on the look.The other 2 problems in the first picture do look like they could be cleaned up a bit.

-I'll work on all the green and blue in the second picture, and as for the wheel, wow my actual DUBS model's which is pretty accurate in alot of places ... its back wheels are inside the car some and when I look at the real life ref pics the wheel IS more flush, thanks Jeff.

Later

[samrayiii]

ALTERATIONS ADDED ...

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/blockyfront.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/blockyback.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/smooth3.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/smooth2.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/samrayiii/smooth1.jpg

[Quike Garcia]

Wow, looks really slick :)