GCSE Final peice Sketch

[WhiteAngel]

Hello there! :)

This is a part of my (A3) final peice for the first peice of coursework for my Art GCSE - Anatomy Study. We had to use inspiration or poses from other artists and their works and I chose the renaissance work of Michelangelo. This is a sort of parody, with a women in the stead of God xD

Anyway, any helpful replies would be greatly appreciated on this:

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g301/Ariah92/scan0001.jpg

Thanks! :)

[emily g]

I like what you have so far and think the woman looks especially nice.
Her breasts look a little too far apart to me, though, so check that.
What's going to happen with her hand that's out of the picture?

[softocean]

draw through!
To me it looks like you may be making several anatomy mistakes by not drawing the limbs through the overlap of your characters.
Nice design btw.

My sketchbook is here (http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=71080)