girl warrior - wip

[_dan_]

hi all, i have done some skribbels on a character i want to model. i need some feed back on the design. the thought was to make a vehicle for her also, a cross bike or a small rodster a´la mad max. please comment.


http://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_1.jpg
http://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_2.jpghttp://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_4.jpg
http://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_5.jpg

[egerie]

Very nice ! I don't have much of a critique to offer, but I think your sketches would be a very good example to junior artists around here. Your construction and study of axis (contra-posto for example) shows trough and I LOVE it.
Col-erase or red prismacolor ?
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[Dev]

I'll have to agree, very nice work on this so far.

[BluePencilArtist]

Nice and very interesting outfit on her.
No crit for you and keep it up good work....
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[Sketch]

That last pic is sweet. Very cool feel to it. How bout developing that canister on her back a bit more. Could make it into a really cool design.

[_dan_]

thanks for the comments,
here is some new sketches of her vehicle, i will probably develop the roadster instead of the crossbike.



http://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_car_2.jpg
http://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_3.jpg



about here story behind her, its not finished, im cind of developing the story behind her as the work goes on, right know what i know about here is that she is living in a mad max enviroment, probably brout up as the only girl - surrounded by brothers she has the mind of a man......hmm well, as i said it under construction.

[thomasaurus]

cool!

[Deth Jester]

nice sketches..I like the idea.. I think you could pull some more idea into her.. I am not getting the road warrior mad max feel though.. seems too advanced, almost steam punkish.. mad max is more post apocolyptic.. I think though the steam punk works for her...

maybe for her weapon make a gatling revolver or something.... I like the hair and goggles..I am really big on asymetrical stuff.. other than her skirt tapering on one side she seems to be pretty symetrical.. maybe you could add a little flair to break it up here and there..

maybe if you did a bio on her it would help.. gave us a story to help you out.. *shrug*

looks good though, lots of nice reference..

keep on truck'n

peace

[CENOBITE]

I have to agree with the 'steampunk' analogy. Cant wait to see more!

[I.was.ink]

This is looking great. Please keep us updated.

[killing.people]

that is sick! i love your line and color style, quick and loose, confedent and informative.

the concept is pretty sweet. i like the chick's hair and the car design is ballsy, i like.

[helix7]

Awesome stuff... It's great to see exploratory sketches and color tests, which I don't see a whole lot of here. It's a fun behind-the-scenes look at how you are arriving at the final concept. I like that you've even explored different hair styles and equipment setups.

And from the looks of her I think this girl might stand a pretty good chance against the Tomb Raider. :)

[battlemonkey]

CRAP!!! thats beautiful, i love the idea that you can see your thinking process. wish i had a crit, but i'm drawing a blank. the girl kind of reminds me of a childrens doll. beautiful work, keep posting PLEASE we could learn a lot from you!
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