First post (nudity)

[Glasswalker]

I've been lurking a while, and after a great pep talk from JP and some others, I got off my duff and decided to get things ready for some shows. This one will be at Necronomicon. Critiques are welcome, even the ones with red lines all over the piece.

http://www.tayholt.com/sketches/loathingSmall.jpg

The higher res version is at www.tayholt.com/sketches/loathingBig.jpg

Thanks for looking in.

[Dementist]

Nice concept! Vampire with suicidal tendencies... interesting!

Just three small problems from my perspective. First,t he flames, well, just don't seem like flames. Yes, I know it's special "Vamp fire," but it still basically looks like a several ribbons wrapped arround his forearm. Secondly, (and not to be picky) since the entire side of his body seems to be recieving direct light because of the way its shaded, shouldn't IT be aflame as well? Finally, his pecs look a bit off to me.

But hell, I'm just nit-picking. Nice rendering, over-all!