lamest thread ever!

[Mort]

i just tried to ease my troubling gray mass by writing some poetry ..just recently got intouch with my sensitive side..and now i will try to torture the lost souls whom enter this lame thread by a poem or two:)


sanity flowing no air to fly my mind floating free no air to breathe free falling lowering mental approval bouncing up again free feel the fresh air free looking down falling close my mind raising lowering voices mind back on track no air to breathe no pollution in my free mind need to rest my mind slow down want to get up wake feels disorientated no directions to follow feeling free wishful thinking must stop thinking let my mind go fresh air to breathe feels like falling upwards no direction my mind is finally free no thought what comes next feels liberated no earth no heaven no me coming home why does it feel like landing freedome in mind home centering destination feeling free no air home.

[tyboogie]

tributary where we were weary some say we sleep so summers creep by feeling free into teh sky i cant free flow when i know that hasbro hasnt slowed teh tonka truck and gi joe is more than a bro. my little pony was a phony but teh sparkles were true and she said we were through so i boo''ed her and woo'ed her til teh cows came home. the thousands of drones sat proud on their thrones while slumberland jolly pops got tehir jollys popped into oblivion. i could float here forever and sever ties to unmarked kin when we find freedom within i shall sow some seeds in teh den.

[Mort]

:chug:

[incognito]

Wow, rhyming is hard. I just tried right now and couldn't get more that like 3 words.
:D

[egerie]

rhyming in alexandrins is hard

[Muttonhead]

Lunch Meat

a poem by Muttonhead

Tasty treat,
Lunchy meat,
So savory and so good.

I do feel
That this here meal,
Tastes the way lunch always should.

Mayo I'll slather
And friends I will gather,
To revel in my lunch-eating fury!

But don't touch my jerky,
Or handle my turkey,
Else you'll learn of pain in a hurry!

-fin

[mcotie]

i tried rymin with my mis matched timin the walls I start climbin, palms are swaety start slimin. just an old joke i am old coat again cant seem to spin like the young bucks-- look at em grin. don't make a joke of me i know how to be free just takes me longer see. i type retype backspace all hype no wing no prayer save the time on my paper with the lead and eraser my poetry's in motion with my imaginotion can't speak in rhymes without rehearsal but i can draw in my sleep without reversal. so i'll leave it to you to make your art with words but either way you slice it we all need to be heard.


mitch

[incognito]

Originally posted by mcotie
so i'll leave it to you to make your art with words but either way you slice it we all need to be heard.

That is just great....I just had a though...what if everyone here is actually a serial killer who can draw?! :eek:

[Michael_H]

Sounds like that jack the ripper theory.

[Erik]

from seriegraph to epitaph in six seconds.

[Mort]

heres another one :)
called goldfish..

i have a pet..
a wet pet

stay tuned for more brain farts...

[Vader]

Cool

[tyboogie]

mixmatched mysogny shes a prodigy of a lesser half and addept at being daft. i want charles in charge of you but youd be blue if he sent you to your room while im in the kitchen making "it" with the oldest blonde your in teh bathroom with your tool thinking your bond. thats right better get mako cus your a fako and this aint no quack doctor so go back to soccer mom your sliced liked salami and i wont accept any aplogy.

sorry--when i freestyle i automatically go into battle mode
all in good fun--not directed at anyone

[incognito]

oh its on :)
"meh" nm, I suck at this.

There once was a pencil
It drew really well.
When I was done with it
I felt real swell.
Please don't mind me
And what I say.
Because someday
I will own you.
Don't run away
So what I am trying to say
Is that you shouldn't be.
Afraid to see me.

Oh yeah, I am so proffesional at this:)

[Mort]

arent we all ;)

[Tedsuo]

*ahem*


The rain, the rain

On my window pain.




:blah:

[sepulveda]

Originally posted by Tedsuo
*ahem*









je,je,je.....
that's funny.....like macaroni?

(does that actually rhyme?)

[Mort]

ode to woman!
:)


woman...
summer wind..
happy...
heat..
smiling.
singing..
dancing..
passion..
freedome..
satisfaction..
relaxed..
glow..
heat..
happy..
summerwind..
woman..