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[Jason Manley]

one of our members Nardfrog asked that I give him a crit...Im working today so instead I post them here for you all to critique for him.

let him have it!

:)

j

[Jason Manley]

here is the second stage

[morphine]

Great concept! Nicely painted too.
But I do spot a few anatomic [sp?] inconsistencies.

The left biceps... where it ends at the bottom and where it connects to the forearm. It should end between what I'm gessing are the two main muscles on the forearm.

The chest muscles look a bit flat for me. I'd add a bit more o' shadows at the bottom of them to make them more proheminent [sp?].

[killing.people]

nardfrog:

doope and first of all this piece is swift-justice. coloring is well above jedi status, i like the realisim of texture where machine meets flesh. it looks wet and bloody and dry and their .. grrreat! -doaauope! the crotch looks holesomely hansom. *gasp* i know where my monster got his extra nipples! more than two nipples give a being mystical powers .. just take the pig for example.

i see it is still in a develpment stage,
here is the da` 'ting boddering me man, oiee!:

i see that the form's reaction to the huge cybernetic equiptment look's like it needs some help before you get to far into rending it. i think his stomach muscles would loose shape to this bulky cod piece advancement. i think it would make it a little more intereseting and less symbolized to see the internal body reacting to slabs of machinery carefully installed through the damnation's body .. or large tubes jammed under his fat and skin. its skin would stretch and possibly need more grafted in to keep from tearing under use.

-kill.people

[nardfrog]

First off, big thanks to Jason for doing this.

A liitle note to the veiwers: I drew the first version you see the second day i had my wacom. I did it from skratch in the computer so i suffers in some places. Last night i decided to spruce it up a bit because im much more familiar with it - ive had it for four months now.

Morphine: Yeah Im still developing my skills of anatomy- ill keep that in mind

Killing.People: thankx for the input. Like i said the actual concept kinda suffers cause i did it start-to-finish in my comp. Expect more developed pieces from me in the future. I definately agree with ya.

[keyth]

hey nardie. good to hear from you again. i love the image. i agree with the other guy about the anatomy...but hey, that's an ongoing struggle for us amateurs anyways:D
the metal looks great. are you photoshoping or paintering? i'll try to post some more pencils (like the old days) soon.

does this mean you will be posting more? or is this some kind of nardfrog tease?

:p

[nardfrog]

Yo keyth, Im using photoshop 6. I really want painter but aint got no connections or moolah. So im assed out.
And unfortunately i still aint got no web space so again, Im assed out. Jason Manley posted these pics so its probabley not gonna happen again.:(
Thanks for the responce.

Watch them laser crab, they're quick.