The Dorum Beast II

[maxetormer]

my lastest proyect :D
coments and opinions are as usual more than wellcome :D

This is the shades study i made for the digital painting i am doing

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/maxetormer/dorum1.3.jpg

and this is the 12 hours color wip of the beast :

BW the cape is made 50% cotton 50% wind that is the reason why it bends on the sky :D

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/maxetormer/torumc2.jpg

[incognito]

I like it...alot, but whats with his head? I like how you made it feel like you are actually that high.

[maxetormer]

i ma glad u like it :) and as for the head , the head is the body :D so the eyes are on the torso =)

[maxetormer]

I am writing this cause u are not the first person to critic my head-torso in one idea.

Is is really that hard to figure out how this caracter works? cause i thougth that now that i has been painted, the imagen would be more clear, but now i am beginig to think that i most have done somethig terrible wrong, (do i fail to see what with exactitud), i just made a beast that instead of having a neck-head structure has the eyes on the seccion of skin where the "head shoud be" i am not agry or anything but i seriusoly need some input here, does my concept is so badly done so that only %10 of the people that see it understand it?
cause if that is the case, i prolly shoud change the anathomy of the beast even do i like it as it is

:? help :(

see ya i dont mean to be rude or anything but i could not think of any other way to express this :D

[incognito]

no prob. I think it is just the position of the eyes, usually eyes are horizontal and not vertical, no problem though, its looks good.

[maxetormer]

okas i just need to be sure about the understading of the image :D thanks so much for solving my doubs about it and for pointing out what is the feature the you finded weird about the caracter. At least now i know what u where seeing (at some degree at least :P ) :D i apresiiate the input a lot :D

[R_M]

I think the head thing is pretty clear and the eyes are cool.

I like the colours, but the cape and the hair are abit to long and distracting.