just a girl

[amoe]

hi every1

http://www.iritor.com/~amoe/girl_04.JPG

i finished this pic today (thank god. i allready got tired of it)

(done in PS7, ref used)

c&c are more than wellcome

-amoe-

[Tedsuo]

That's pretty damn sweet! Very cool!


Some crits:

I notice you're using a lot of the same colros and values in both the girl and the ship. It flattens things out
and can be confusing, for example at first I thought the ammo belt on her gun was part of the ship.


More minor crit is her arm could be definted more, and her wrists are a bit odd.


Sweet stuff though! It really looks like you put a lot into this.

[Triton]

I like the backgrond and the colours, great job! ....

But you should work on her anotomy some more. Her hands are to small and her stomach and arms are to long.

But othervise it´s really good :)

[haohmaru]

:chug:
(you know what i think about it =)

[incognito]

I like it, I also really like that eye tattoo thing. Her legs look a bit wrong though.
:chug:

[amoe]

:)

the whole anatomy is a little bit fucked up. the bad thing is that i made this pic to practice anatomy. :)

now we c i have to practice alot more... (i m still a noooob)

-amoe-

[incognito]

get Grays anatomy :) Helps me.

[DustinTrimble]

The anatomy problems that stand out are the lower arms, the plane where you have shadow at above the elbow seems like it shouls be anged more faceing her body(especially the more she pulls the upper arm up, second the pelvis front where the corners of the bone are tappableor make a dimple(superior Illiac spine I think.) isn't really shown, if you are practiceing anatomy it should be there, The leg muscles don't seem there, and the leg shape seems too thin, with no variance at all. Lastly the thumb looks like it could use more meat.
These are just minor problems, I think the biggest thing that could use improvement is the initial gesture, it looks like she is in pain holding this straight on vertically straight pose. Here is a paint over of just a gesture(you could twist this in infinite ways), loose as my junk is.
http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/critgesture1.htm
in it I did some green to emphasize the way the plains there are away from the front. You where already doing this with the legs. Also ignore the arm i drew, it's just green where I think you could hve angled the plane there more.

On the things that stand out as good- definilty solid form on the metal/plastic/leather stuff, tedsou's comment about color was dead on, but you have a very strong base to be able to really easily go back into. good job handling the face, it looks pretty natural!(she's cute!) Good stuff.

[amoe]

thanx 4 the paint over. :)

-amoe-

[bellas]

good job, more realistic. Well the hands see small for me, sorry for my bad english. see you

[Ant4d]

really good!!
pretty picture.

my crit would be the same as in first two posts.

Anton

[amoe]

thanx 4 the imput :)

i guess i ll only fix the hands. i don t want to waste too much time on this pic anymore and there r some other pix i still want to finish asap...

like this 1

http://www.iritor.com/~amoe/overview06.JPG

now it s time to let the thread die :)

c ya
-amoe-

[cycrincy]

this last pic looks like the finalfantasy 8 chool place