From Republic to Empire: Generals planning the Invasion

[tegehel]

- many thanks to the peeps in WIP (and particularly foster.)

- revised version, changed the staff back to a weapon (better idea), reworked the eyes so they look at the shadowy orc, some subtle background work.

- I see some problems with the Orc's armor...will fix.

C.

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/colors/Veni_Vidi_Vici2_v2.jpg

[bfaubion]

i like the lighting, i cant tell what its coming from, but it still works great. one thing that caught my attention is the orc guys right hand, its just way to big, it might work better at a diffent angle as well.

[Tedsuo]

I agree with bf there about the hand. You've got it and the sceptre parallel to the picture plane, which sort of flatens it out compared to everyone else. Also, he doesn't appear to be looking at the orc in the foreground.


Other than that, two thumbs up! :)

[tegehel]

a few fixes, some more need to be done (I've just noticed, as I post).

C.