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Foxglove
July 5th, 2003, 03:56 PM
Hi all!
I posted a very early WIP of this earlier this summer and I'm still futzing between work. I'd really appreciate some C&C!
Thanks!
http://www.rsad.edu/~lsmith1/Dailysketch/goatanthro9.jpg

ceenda
July 6th, 2003, 04:36 AM
Hiya.

Firstly, I think this is looking good. The texture on the hair/mane is great.

However, the lighting seems to be a bit sporadic. The light is coming from the right (for the mountains on the left) but is also coming from the left (for the mountains on the right). Try and have a clear method for where the main light source is and base most of your shading on that source. Try adding a shadow as well for the pony-tails where they go over the coat.

Anyway, I like it. It's a nice concept. :beer: