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Mull
January 26th, 2007, 07:28 AM
Hi everyone, my first time posting any of my work, held back due to the high standard but if I wanna improve then I gotta post.

Here's my first landscape that I spent any time with, normally just speed paint landscapes. This is the final version I settled on but its had various differences along the way (other versions are on my PB account if anyones interested)

Painted in PS using Wacom Intuos3, thanks in advance :D

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e59/shaunmull/Digital%20Drawings/landscapefinished2.jpg

Gentrifier
January 26th, 2007, 09:49 AM
Nice job! I really like that it takes some examination to see the intricacies.
I'd like to see some indication of a shadow being cast by the goldfish onto the fog to identify it's place spacially. I'm also not a huge fan of focal points being so smack dab in the middle of a composition, but it adds tension to the piece, so maybe that's a good thing.
I'd also like to see more sharpness and maybe a touch more detail in the rocks on the center landmass.

Keep it up, though. It's a fantastic starting point.

Alec

Mull
January 26th, 2007, 11:57 AM
thanks for the comment and advice, I'll certainly add the points made.

Thanks again :D