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artkitty
July 3rd, 2003, 10:57 PM
About halfway done with this image for a graphic novel project. I'm trying to have this and some sample pages ready for Dragon*Con.

http://fern.junglestudio.com/art2003/sketch/cover-inprog3.jpg

I sketched in a third figure on the right since it seemed empty, but a couple people have suggested it's not necessary. My major concern is the construction on the armored chick; I want it to seem like she's slightly crouched, looking up, and not squashed or strangely deformed. I'll probably straighten and lower the skyline to leave room for the title.

So, criticism is welcome! Don't hold back, tear it to shreds. I can take it, anything to make the final product have 'zing'!
:D

Groover McNab
July 5th, 2003, 02:54 AM
I would agree that the additional person you sketched in isn't necessary. Maybe you can scale the girl with the armor up a bit and move her a little to the upper right close to where the sketchy figure is. Anyway, that's my two cents. It looks really good.

artkitty
July 9th, 2003, 11:23 AM
Here's an update on the cover!

http://fern.junglestudio.com/art2003/sketch/cover-inprog4.jpg

I did end up moving the armored girl a bit.