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DanRamey
January 22nd, 2007, 12:00 AM
This is not my line art as that seems to be the standard for submitting to comicbook coloring jobs. Credit to Val Semeiks, Prentis Rollins, and DC comics, but all the color is mine. I would appreciate a crit on the coloring.

http://www.danramey.com/images/dcmil1-16.jpg

kawakaze
January 22nd, 2007, 12:25 AM
its pretty vibrant and saturated which is nice for this type of comic. i like that there is a minimalist feel to it as well, it does not seem overlydrawn to perfection. it would be nice if the ray beams and fire and crazyness were a little more eye catching though. u have some great scenes in there which would work very well if they were more dramatically lit. in the middle image on the bottom particularly, i think u should be abel to play w that beam a little more as well as the rising soul. awsome stuff though.

DanRamey
January 22nd, 2007, 01:06 AM
I took your suggestions on the bottom panel, and I think it's stronger now.
http://www.danramey.com/images/dcmil1-16-2.jpg