Silenced *Help bitte*

[Iiori]

I have this sketch, that I need to get done for someone, and I would really like some feedback on it. Just things I can improve on. Any help you could give me would be more than appreciated. ^^

I wonder if the second guys face is to big, compared to the girl or it if looks awkward. I am not finished, but I don't want to go on yet since I'm not very good at noticing mistakes.

I still have to darken the guy and her hair etc..


ANYWAYS, if you help I will love you forever.

http://membres.lycos.fr/vbcserenity/banner/duded.jpg

I also posted this already in my sketchbook. Im not sure if this is allowed to post in here too,:o

Here my sketch book.
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?s=&postid=73375#post73375

[dondada]

I think you're right, the guy's face is too big. If you make his chin a little smaller it would look a lot better I think. The chin is disproportionately big compared to the rest of his face. and maybe if you shortened his nose a little too. Its like three times as long as the girl's nose.

[Iiori]

Thanks, I appreciate the crit. ^^ Want a new bride?::evilbat:


Alrighty I can work on the chin. I think that would help a lot. Thank you.

In my other thread I was told the guy needs to be more anglular? How would I go about by doing that? More straight lines ? I want him to look more like a man and less like a women. Any ideas?

Ill update once I fix him.

Thank you again. ^^!