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canned_fruit
January 16th, 2007, 10:12 PM
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EmiR
January 17th, 2007, 04:22 AM
hi,
there are a lot things wrong, the "bucket" is totaly wrong. make studys befor you start draw details and color the picture. i draw only the "bucklet" with red lines. i dont want say you draw the picture in 5min., but im sure you draw the sketch in 5mins.! if you want to make it right, first make studys.
ps:PRACTICE
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r297/EmiR_2007/toxicwastecopycopy.jpg
canned_fruit
January 17th, 2007, 06:05 PM
hi,
there are a lot things wrong, the "bucket" is totaly wrong. make studys befor you start draw details and color the picture. i draw only the "bucklet" with red lines. i dont want say you draw the picture in 5min., but im sure you draw the sketch in 5mins.! if you want to make it right, first make studys.
ps:PRACTICE
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r297/EmiR_2007/toxicwastecopycopy.jpg
Thanks, I tried making the back look dented and destorting but I guess that just made it look crappy :/ . I'll go try find a rusty tin can to study...
Any other wrong things?
spotfrog
January 17th, 2007, 09:07 PM
The glowing things on each side look like random fuzzy things... the (fungi?) seem to be shedding light on everything behind them but not themselves, or the ground below. The glow there could be smoother. Also the creatures on top need more contrast in the shading, but over all it's a pretty fun picture.
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