Portfolio (BIG dl) gimme crits

[sjoerd]

Hi it's been a while didnt have mach time to go and wander around these forums :P, tried to get into design school, and i succeeded!

here's the deal, i have to learn a lot imo, and i need crits to push myself further, also i can need all the help i can get to stay on the school.

So please crit and give "sugah coated lovin remarks" (that allways PUSHES me to the limit ;).

oke bye have fun

(dont be to hard on meh!)

http://www.webenga.com/blood/GFX/Flower.jpg
(not too fond of his right legg looks to far away and a bit outtof proportions)

http://www.webenga.com/blood/GFX/Forestprincess.jpg
Mwah dont know anything to say about this one except, i really liked how the hands turned out...


http://www.webenga.com/blood/GFX/Axenorc.jpg
A bit off a pose :/



http://www.webenga.com/blood/GFX/dragon.jpg
A good friend of mine is gonna tattoo this one on his shoulder, i think his right claw and leggs are a bit too small, the head looks to big but thats because of the hair imo.



http://www.webenga.com/blood/GFX/BoogieMan.jpg
The second real colerjob in photoshop, colered over a old sketch of mine. Kinda got it wrong with the angle of the light :/...


http://www.webenga.com/blood/GFX/Skyhigh.jpg

recent photoshop "thingie". allready crited but dont let that stop you, GO AHEAD!

www.funkfolio.com / www.funkfolio.com/new

online portfolio together with a close friend of mine Marijn Wijbenga he designed the "home" and we co-designed the "/new"


Oke do as you please burn me down blow sunshine up me ars, but let it be reaseneble :) oke thx in advance!

[I.was.ink]

I really like your first two. You're right about the leg in the first one.

Great pose on him btw.

[sjoerd]

Thx for the just one comment :O

[Mysen]

Hey man.. I think your pencil work is great. But your color stuff definately could use some work.

you clown guy. his teeth wouldnt glow that much from the way you ahve the other shadows on his face.

[sjoerd]

True true Mysen

the shadow highlights dont fit at all,

maybe il alter it with the candle up in front that would make it better i guess. :O

Thx Ink!