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thebrettartist
June 30th, 2003, 02:17 PM
Hey everyone, it's been a while since I was here. Been busy playing the Vice City, man that game rocks. This is my latest. C + C welcome. Thanks,

- Brett

www.thebrett.com (http://www.thebrett.com)

http://www.thebrett.com/nukegirl01.gif

BluePencilArtist
June 30th, 2003, 02:32 PM
Not bad.
I like her t-shirt......
Keep it up good and show me more....
:chug:

blackhand
June 30th, 2003, 03:31 PM
You've got some issues with the anatomy in this piece. The left breast seems just a bit too perky and upturned. The right shoulder looks a bit too dislocated and the right arm itself seems too long. Your hands could use some work as well.

The sketchy line quality works well for the hair, adding a grungy quality, but it muddles the facial features, especially the nose.

Finish drawing the legs as well, just to ground the piece. It looks like a good start, but with a little more work and refinement, you can make it solid.

DragonGX
July 1st, 2003, 12:36 AM
yeah waht he said abotu anatomy.. just keep working on it and youll get it..

Sinix
July 1st, 2003, 05:28 AM
Aside from what the other people said, I'm liking the blood.

Maximillion
July 1st, 2003, 06:26 PM
I dig your slightly off anatomy, although I do agree that the nose is muddled as a result of the looseness, and perhaps unifying the boobs would be good.
I don't like the lack of feet. But it’s great! Don’t get too caught up in accuracy, let your style come out and the accuracy will follow... not good advice for everyone, but it's relevant for you.

cycrincy
July 26th, 2003, 11:54 AM
i like the lower area lol nice :rolleyes:

nardfrog
July 28th, 2003, 01:20 AM
i think this picture is bad ass, but the legs and hips need to be fixed. Her waist and hips are too high, and her legs are too skinny. Upper half; bad ass!

alti
July 28th, 2003, 03:26 AM
ahh love the blood splatter on the gun, interesting style.

softdrawer
July 28th, 2003, 11:54 AM
truely bloody... interesting ;)

i would try fixing her boobs though...

gj

shin
July 28th, 2003, 12:00 PM
I...agree you all...:D

ilkka
July 30th, 2003, 04:41 AM
great piece!..I also visited your web site..I really like your style!!

lauri
July 30th, 2003, 08:28 AM
t-shirt design - gooooood:D
youre style is something to admire of
but how big they are in actual size?(if its not a secret)

Snowfly
July 31st, 2003, 12:27 AM
Looks very good! The quirks in the anatomy enhance it more.