Photoshop over original sketches :)

[Newbie Artist]

Hi, this is a sketch/drawing i did this afternoon. I think i got most of the perspective right, although my shading needs much more work.

Can anyone help/critisise?

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3892/starshipsketch2is9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/7461/cockpitdetailll1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5279/rightwingip8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I wanted it to have human features in a way, the open mouth, the sensors on the nose cone(nostrils), the eye triangle windshield, the spikes on the wings to show the muscle in arms, force. You get the idea............

[Newbie Artist]

Hi guys and girls, i took the original image i had sketched, and used it for my first ever photoshop, i know its basic and needs a lot of work still, but i like it.

Sort of a cartoon style in a way.

Any comments?

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/5306/starshipspacescenefn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[themissinglink]

the design of the ship looks cool though as far as i can tell it looks like you used a ruler and drew some parallel lines...that is not perspective. there should be a vanishing point somewhere (probably off of the page) where all the lines meet. all of those parallel lines should not be parallel and should meet at a single point (though the point does not have to be on the page). I hope that my coments make some kind of sense

[Newbie Artist]

Yeah, your completely right actually. Lol, i just hope with practice i get there! Thanks themissinglink

[Envisor]

The ship looks great. and themissinglink is right, perspective is off in this one, but ti just takes practice, I have to do the same thing also. Hope to see more soon. Keep posting.

My Sketchbook- C&C very welcome
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=85772

[Newbie Artist]

Just a quick peice of work i did earlier.

Not great, but its very early in the mornign, lol.

What do you think?

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1294/spacebackgroundscene3dn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)